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| Students at Oberlin College
created this sculpture to represent the Underground Railroad. The
tracks disappear right into the ground.
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Old
Zeke, the blacksmith just showed up one day and he seemed to be the
perfect person to act as a guide to Will in the foreign territory of
Kentucky. Two years after
I’d written the draft and before it was purchased by the publisher, I
read a book about the underground railroad in which connections were
drawn between certain quilts with a wheel motif, the spiritual
“Ezekiel Saw a Wheel,” and the occupation of blacksmith.
That set my spine to tingling, for I’d named my blacksmith
Ezekiel months and months before. It
seemed like the right time to push ahead with the book and so we did. As
strong as the many voices grew in the book --- Miss Delight, Suzanna,
Old Zeke --- Will’s voice was the most emphatic.
As I shared the story, a chapter at a time, with my writers’
group, one person asked how I did it, how had I captured the voice of a
boy living that long ago. “Did
you really live back in the 1850s?” she asked. I
didn’t of course, and at the time, while the story was still rushing
at me; I didn’t want to think about where Will’s voice was coming
from. Superstition, most likely, but I was afraid if I wondered too
much, he might stop talking and the book would get stuck.
A few weeks after finishing the first draft, however, I
identified the source. Will
was speaking to me in the voice of my cousin, Mark. I’d spent a chunk of time with him when I was 18 and he was
16, a boy from a small Ohio town. Like
Will, he was hot-headed, full of opinions and ideas, and he had a great
sense of humor. Still,
writing a guy’s story can be a challenge for a woman writer, so I
asked my husband and father to read an early draft and see if they found
any spots that seemed too “girly.” With
the help of my cousin, father and husband, I’ve tried to tell Will’s
story accurately and hope it rings true for you.
One reviewer seemed to think so, describing Stealing South as
“muscular.” That’s a
good sign so maybe I’ll try it again. |
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